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Monday, October 11, 2010

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Alone for No. 15. Maven knew where to stash his gun.

Next, get off at Rumney Station for her car.

It would be nice to finish the job.


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© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Picture from Susan's blog, Stony River

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25 comments:

  1. SandeeSun Oct 10, 04:12:00 PM 2010

    This has to be very difficult to do. You do it very well though.

    Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)

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  2. anthonynorthSun Oct 10, 04:22:00 PM 2010

    A fiendish little one that :-)
    Nicely done.

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  3. DianeSun Oct 10, 04:24:00 PM 2010

    Uh oh! Troubles a' coming!!! :O)

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  4. PeggySun Oct 10, 04:29:00 PM 2010

    You do...do this very well.
    Murder on the Orient Express.
    Enjoyed this so much!

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  5. Sylvia KSun Oct 10, 04:35:00 PM 2010

    Oh, great murder mystery for the day! Well done indeed, Jim! Hope you have a great week ahead!

    Sylvia

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  6. Susan at Stony RiverSun Oct 10, 04:51:00 PM 2010

    Trains and murder mysteries go so well together -- I love this!

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  7. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}Sun Oct 10, 04:53:00 PM 2010

    lets hope for Maven's sake the police weren't watching her board the train.

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  8. EG CameraGirlSun Oct 10, 06:16:00 PM 2010

    And to think I've always thought Maven was such a nice guy!

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  9. PatSun Oct 10, 06:33:00 PM 2010

    We were thinking along somewhat similar lines. I like murder mysteries...good one!

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  10. Kay L. DaviesSun Oct 10, 06:33:00 PM 2010

    Yes, as Anthony said, fiendish. I like it.

    Kay, Alberta

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  11. Kay L. DaviesSun Oct 10, 07:45:00 PM 2010

    Jim -- I looked at Adi's webpage and I'm impressed. What a wonderful dog.
    We think our dog Lindy would be a good therapy dog as she loves people of all ages. She and my husband regularly stop at an old folks' home on their way home from the hospital.
    However, she needs to go to a few more obedience classes first. She will come when called, outside, but inside she'll only come if she wants to. If told to stand and stay, she'll sit or lie down.
    Just some fine tuning, that's all. LOL

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  12. Kay L. DaviesSun Oct 10, 07:47:00 PM 2010

    Oops, did I say "hospital"? I was thinking of therapy dogs going to visit in hospitals, but I should have said on their way home from the post office.
    Maybe a few obedience classes, or classes of some sort, might be a good idea for me.
    -- K

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  13. AnonymousSun Oct 10, 09:10:00 PM 2010

    Ooo a mystery...very well done. :) I love a good murder mystery :) Have a great week ahead :)

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  14. One Prayer GirlSun Oct 10, 09:14:00 PM 2010

    There is a train that runs out of Ft. Myers, Florida called the "Mystery Train". It is a dinner train ride that goes out over the river and back.
    Along with dinner there is a set of actors performing a mystery play from car to car. This MFM reminded me of that. Well done.

    HERE IS MINE

    PG

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  15. AnonymousSun Oct 10, 11:28:00 PM 2010

    ohoho - that's a lot for 139 characters... good job!

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  16. DeborahMon Oct 11, 01:07:00 AM 2010

    Oooh intrigue...I like it!

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  17. Ellie GarrattMon Oct 11, 02:47:00 AM 2010

    And doesn't she look so innocent?! It just goes to show you can't judge someone by their appearance. A great take on the picture.

    Have a lovely week x

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  18. Mama BadgerMon Oct 11, 02:03:00 PM 2010

    A turn! Will none of us send this poor woman on a fun vacation?

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  19. Ms.DaisyMon Oct 11, 02:14:00 PM 2010

    Jim,
    I want you to write more! This is too good a start to stop now! :)
    Clever MM! Thanks for your nice comment on my MM this week.



    ~Jean

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  20. Lisa Ricard ClaroMon Oct 11, 02:44:00 PM 2010

    Mystery and intrigue...I like it! Great take.

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  21. hopeMon Oct 11, 05:17:00 PM 2010

    Of course now I want to yell, "What job!?" :)

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  22. septembermomMon Oct 11, 05:23:00 PM 2010

    Love a little mystery. Terrific :)

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  23. quillyTue Oct 12, 12:24:00 AM 2010

    Oh! A murder mystery on a train! Where's Hercule Periot?

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  24. LenoreTue Oct 12, 02:00:00 AM 2010

    ha ha! watch out! great plot twist

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  25. ruthiTue Oct 12, 06:08:00 PM 2010

    hmmmm... this is exciting. hope she will not leave a mark for the CSI guys.

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