
Elin loved Prince Charming's gallantry.
Yet she hated his back seat driving.
What a dilemma.
She took her horse for better pastures.
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Picture from Susan's blog, Stony River (from Dover Publications freebies)
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I love the picture prompt this week and I love your choice of description.
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Plenty more fish in the sea, eh?
ReplyDeleteBetter pastures may be the best option ;-)
ReplyDeleteGood one.
A clever take on the picture - I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
I love the thought of him being a back seat driver, very funny. :-)
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Sometimes it's the small things that break up a relationship. But back-seat driver? She's better off without him!
ReplyDeleteGood for her! Clever view of the picture.
ReplyDeleteBack seat drivers are always the pits!
ReplyDeleteOh yes -- those back seat drivers can be awful! Good move on her part!
ReplyDeleteAnd my word verification is:
hessoff or he's off!
Poor pegasus never would have agreed to take the bridle if he'd known Bellerophon was married.
ReplyDeleteNothing worse then a backseat driver. I wonder if she has used the ejection seat that comes with that model!
ReplyDeleteGood!
Ah, yes! I think better pastures are definitely in order! Great one for the day! Enjoy your week!
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Oooh, she's out man-hunting, huh? But, yeah, backseat driving is extremely annoying! Very clever, Jim!
ReplyDeleteWho needs that kind of attention when you drive. LOL. Great one.
ReplyDeleteA girl's gotta do, what she's gotta do. :) Creative!
ReplyDeleteBut is it greener on the other side? Very well done my friend :)
ReplyDeleteElin should wax up the back of the saddle, and practice her 'jump starts' ROFL
ReplyDeleteGood for her!
Love the "back-seat driving" comment. :)
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