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Monday, December 27, 2010

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"I swear you pick the worst looking piece of fence to sit," she said, scowling.

"I have only eyes for you," he cooed.

"Yeah, beady."


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© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Birds on the Fence picture by Susan. Her blog, Stony River

Check over at Susan's blog, Stony River, for more microfiction Monday! They should read quickly because our requirement is 140 characters or less.
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13 comments:

  1. k. riggs gardnerMon Dec 27, 12:14:00 AM 2010

    I am first to comment!! I can't believe it! I am so lucky!

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  2. k. riggs gardnerMon Dec 27, 12:22:00 AM 2010

    Now that I've read your Micro Jim, let me tell you, it's awfully cute. Well done!

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  3. AnonymousMon Dec 27, 02:50:00 AM 2010

    She knows his mind...

    i'm new nice to meet you

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  4. AnonymousMon Dec 27, 06:04:00 AM 2010

    Awh sweet, love is blind after all :O)

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  5. hopeMon Dec 27, 07:48:00 AM 2010

    Ah, some guys just can't win, huh?

    Nice one!

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  6. PeggyMon Dec 27, 09:03:00 AM 2010

    Jim;

    Another good one Jim.
    Happy New Year to you and yours!

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  7. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}Mon Dec 27, 09:24:00 AM 2010

    I chuckled out loud at this, Poor Fellow, it's almost like he is being Hen Pecked. All the best for 2011

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  8. CherylMon Dec 27, 10:30:00 AM 2010

    Sweet MM. I swear it brought a tear to me eye.

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  9. SandeeMon Dec 27, 11:39:00 AM 2010

    She's a bit snarly isn't she? I hope he doesn't get his hopes up. Just isn't going to happen. Well done.

    Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)

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  10. Maria@BubblegumandDuctTapeMon Dec 27, 12:07:00 PM 2010

    one of them isn't very happy!! the other one is all romantic. I wonder which one is the female, could it be the romantic one or the crabby one.
    nice one!

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  11. PutzMon Dec 27, 02:07:00 PM 2010

    you and the misses sitting on that rail???????

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  12. quillyMon Dec 27, 06:38:00 PM 2010

    You know, she's right. He does look a bit beady eyed -- and shifty, too1

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  13. Melissa SugarMon Jan 03, 09:54:00 AM 2011

    Well done. You have a gift for this.

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