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Monday, January 10, 2011

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I wrote this for Susan's microFiction Monday. You can too! Just write a short tale (fiction preferred) about this picture in less than 140 characters and spaces. Then tell her and wait for the critique and praises!

Here goes my entry:

O Mr. Mothman! Hold me tight!

I'm mad about you, say you love me too!

I can hardly wait. I'll rush home, change, and pour some wine!


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Mr. Mothman's picture by Susan. It's posted on her blog, Stony River
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24 comments:

  1. SandeeSun Jan 09, 06:38:00 PM 2011

    Yep, that's what she said alright. Very well done.

    Have a terrific day Jim. Big hug. :)

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  2. Susan FobesSun Jan 09, 06:57:00 PM 2011

    A bit of a creepy romance don't you think? LOL!

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  3. Sylvia KSun Jan 09, 07:04:00 PM 2011

    Ah, nothing like a little creepy romance these days! More common than we know, I suspect! I love it, Jim! Hope you had a great weekend!

    Sylvia

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  4. PeggySun Jan 09, 07:08:00 PM 2011

    I guess beauty is in the eye of the
    beholder! Nice take!

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  5. Kay L. DaviesSun Jan 09, 07:09:00 PM 2011

    Aha, a totally different take on it - she's in love with him!! I would never have thought of that.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  6. SparkleFarkelSun Jan 09, 07:30:00 PM 2011

    Looks like Mothman's gonna get the "blues," but only in a good way, if you know what I mean. LOL!

    Come for a visit?
    SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

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  7. Michael G-GSun Jan 09, 07:38:00 PM 2011

    Wine does it, everytime.

    Nice story, Jim--good voice.

    Hope you have a great week.

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  8. AnonymousSun Jan 09, 08:26:00 PM 2011

    So did they get together? Was he everything she hoped for? Inquiring minds want to know...
    Have a great week. Cheers.

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  9. Maria@BubblegumandDuctTapeSun Jan 09, 08:58:00 PM 2011

    oh my! she's in love with mothman, I hope she cas caster oil for him too, lol.

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  10. quillyMon Jan 10, 12:46:00 AM 2011

    I hope she doesn't leave the porch light on. She'll be inside drinking the wine alone and waiting all night for Mothman to show up, and in the morning she'll not only wonder why he stood her up, but what was with the big pile of ashes on her front porch.

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  11. moondustwriterMon Jan 10, 02:03:00 AM 2011

    Wonder what his breath is like???

    Nice MFM

    Moon Smiles and have a great week

    my romance is a little off

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  12. UnknownMon Jan 10, 04:57:00 AM 2011

    I am a sucker for a good love story!

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  13. AnonymousMon Jan 10, 06:24:00 AM 2011

    well they do say love is blind LOL! :O)

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  14. BECKYMon Jan 10, 06:49:00 AM 2011

    Hi Jim! Yes, a different take, and a good one at that!! :)

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  15. izzyMon Jan 10, 07:13:00 AM 2011

    WINE? yikes that might dismantle him-
    Thanks

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  16. hopeMon Jan 10, 07:37:00 AM 2011

    Who knew Mothman was a ladykiller? :0

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  17. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}Mon Jan 10, 08:37:00 AM 2011

    It looks like it might be a one sided romance. Maybe the wine will loosen the Mothman up.

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  18. CadMon Jan 10, 12:48:00 PM 2011

    Thinks - his wings have got the moth in! LOL

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  19. Maude LynnMon Jan 10, 03:00:00 PM 2011

    It's love!

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  20. DianeMon Jan 10, 04:20:00 PM 2011

    Fun one, have a great week! :O)

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  21. KarenMon Jan 10, 11:26:00 PM 2011

    LOL! With Mr. Mothman for a mate, good thing there's wine! :>

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  22. moondustwriterTue Jan 11, 01:18:00 AM 2011

    maybe he will change out of his duds as well

    just had to come back

    LOL you made my day

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  23. jabblogTue Jan 11, 08:44:00 AM 2011

    Well, people and mutants find love in the strangest guises ;-)

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  24. PoochTue Jan 11, 12:31:00 PM 2011

    Freakishly romantic, isn't it? Love truly is in the eyes of the beholder!
    :)

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