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Sunday, October 09, 2011

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"Go slow young'n, I'll get lost."

"Eeow" GMum cried, "a bird bit me!" She smacked it with her cane.

Resplendent piñata spewed its candy.

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138 Characters as counted by Design 215
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© 2011 Jimmiehov
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Written for Succinctly Yours – Week 29
The 'resplendent' prompt word and the picture were selected by Grandma.
It's posted on her blog, Grandma's Goulash
Her Rules: Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words. It doesn’t have to be exactly 140, just not more.
Using the prompt word is not required
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7 comments:

  1. anthonynorthSun Oct 09, 04:18:00 PM 2011

    I like that. Different.

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  2. PatSun Oct 09, 08:02:00 PM 2011

    Clever one, Jim! A walking stick would be a perfect weapon for cracking open a pinata!

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  3. Kay L. DaviesSun Oct 09, 09:53:00 PM 2011

    Oh, very tricky, the pinata idea. Nicely done!

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  4. Mrs. JimMon Oct 10, 10:48:00 PM 2011

    That's so very clever, Jim.

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  5. Lisa Ricard ClaroTue Oct 11, 12:44:00 PM 2011

    Short, sweet, and creative in triplet!

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  6. Grandma's GoulashTue Oct 11, 02:35:00 PM 2011

    That one took me by surprise and made me smile. I've got a couple of canes, guess I should get cracking.

    Thanks for your encouragement with our move. Texas sounds great, but a rather long commute to the University of Memphis. When my daughter gets her degree, we just might consider it.

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  7. audrey`Wed Oct 12, 08:52:00 AM 2011

    Fantastic, Dr Jim :)

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