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Sunday, October 14, 2012

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Danny's Disco Dine, by the promenade, was set to make a fortune, $$$'s crisp and cool.

But, he was opposite the also new all-night Fruit Lounge and Danny closed at five.

 


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°°Grandma of Succinctly Yours Week 82 gives these directions: 
°°Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words or less.
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Rest in Peace, dear Adi

11 comments:

  1. Danny's Disco Dine has a nice ring to the name, Dr Jim :)

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  2. Looks like a cute place and I love the name Disco!

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  3. Sounds like time to change the hours! I like making crisp money, don't you?

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  4. Danny should definitely change his closing time to 11 PM!. Who wants to disco from 4 to 5? Cute one, Jim!

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  5. Danny isn't going to make it rich there. Nice one.

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  6. It's said that location is everything, although timing certainly has an impact too. Poor Danny - no crispy bills for him.

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  7. Excellent Jim. As usual.

    Have a terrific day. :)

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  8. I like this way to comment immensely! LOL

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  9. gotta watch those all night fruit places
    I wonder if they put liquor in the fruit :)

    hugs from me and Hope

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  10. Very nicely done...money cannot buy everything. Great job, Jim!! Mine is here
    Have you a BLESSED WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  11. can't compete if you're closed at 5. wonder if they offer my green monster smoothies at Fruit Lounge. lol

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