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Sunday, October 21, 2012

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Betty Lou was watching granddaughter feed her fish.

Don't forget the minnows at the bottom, dear.

Grandma it's a waste. They're all fish bait.

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°°Grandma of Succinctly Yours Week 83 gives these directions:
°°Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words or less.
°°Grandma furnished this week’s fun photo.
°°Word of the Week, 'forget',was furnished by Grandma.

Rest in Peace, dear Adi
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12 comments:

  1. SandeeSun Oct 21, 05:18:00 PM 2012

    Well, she has a point. Very well done.

    Have a terrific day. :)

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  2. audrey`Sun Oct 21, 05:49:00 PM 2012

    The dialogue in the post is very captivating, Dr Jim :) It engages your readers' attention. Just like the colourful fish in the photo.

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  3. Josie Two ShoesSun Oct 21, 07:22:00 PM 2012

    Cute and clever, I sense the inspiration of being around your grandaughter in this piece! :-)

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  4. Chatty CroneSun Oct 21, 08:14:00 PM 2012

    I have always wanted an aquarium - but I don't know I would have very much luck if you know what I mean!

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  5. PatSun Oct 21, 09:13:00 PM 2012

    But those minnows need to be plumped up so that they'll be A-1 fish bait. Very creative, Jim!

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  6. JinksyMon Oct 22, 01:23:00 AM 2012

    Take care of the minnows, and the sharks'll take care of themselves, eh? Hehehe!

    BTW - this is Penny here, Alias Jinksy, if that helps?

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  7. anthonynorthMon Oct 22, 02:36:00 AM 2012

    Ah, the little fishes. Nice one.

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  8. ShaunaMon Oct 22, 08:21:00 PM 2012

    Cool. I can imagine a savvy little girl saying this to her grandma.

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  9. ruthinianTue Oct 23, 07:28:00 PM 2012

    hahaha. she made sense.

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  10. kaykualaWed Oct 24, 09:56:00 AM 2012

    Yes, why should we waste fish bait! Witty take here, Dr Jim!

    Hank

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  11. UnknownWed Oct 24, 10:28:00 PM 2012

    Very clever post, Jim! I can imagine my grand daughter talking to me like that. LOL but I will have to wait a long time for that to happen. Your writing is always poignant and so much fun. Mine is here
    Have you a truly AWESOME WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  12. UnknownThu Oct 25, 05:44:00 AM 2012


    My dearest Dr.Jim ,

    I would like to invite you to join me for two of the memes I am hosting ,
    one is the WEEKEND FUNNIES
    and the other is the ?????? l60 ?????

    Your participation will greatly enrich the meme and I will be very humbled and honored by your presence.

    Hope to see you soon.

    hugs
    shakira

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