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Sunday, January 27, 2013

Succinctly-Yours

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Not so fast, Teddy.

I'm sick and tired of your whack whack here, whack whack there.

You haven't killed a fly in days!

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Word of the Week:whack -- Succinctly Yours Week 97
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7 comments:

  1. Josie Two ShoesSun Jan 27, 02:34:00 PM 2013

    Ahh, I fear a relationship unraveling here, she's starting to complain! :-)

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  2. anthonynorthSun Jan 27, 03:04:00 PM 2013

    Ah, no rag doll likes a loser. Nice one.

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  3. UnknownSun Jan 27, 04:20:00 PM 2013

    Ha - I don't think that's so much to ask!

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  4. Grandma's GoulashMon Jan 28, 08:56:00 AM 2013

    Yes, the relationship may be disintegrating a bit. There's probably more than meets the eye here. Maybe he doesn't take out the trash either!

    I've never seen a succinct tale that used the word of the week 4 times. Blue ribbon, Jim, and a gold star too. :D

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  5. SandeeMon Jan 28, 09:32:00 AM 2013

    What Grandma Goulash said. Yep, that covers it nicely.

    Have a fabulous Monday. :)

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  6. UnknownMon Jan 28, 07:26:00 PM 2013

    Your story almost had me singing - with a whack whack here and a whack whack there; you know like Old MacDonald. I enjoyed it.

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  7. audrey`Tue Jan 29, 03:46:00 PM 2013

    HaHa! :D

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