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Monday, April 15, 2013

Succinctly Yours

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Son, you're flirting with danger when you take loot from women.

Hush Pa, look what you've done to Lou, he's saturated drunk with your advice.

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GMa's Optional Word of the Week is saturate.

GMa's Succinctly Yours Week 108 has the picture and links to other posts and gives the rules.
Rules: Use the photo as inspiration for a story. Maximum of 140 characters OR 140 words.
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8 comments:

  1. That is really cool. I love how they pop out. And they're so unique. You stopped by my blog last week. Thank you,

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  2. Love your microfiction - flirting with danger?

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  3. Ah, advice can be a strange thing. Nice one.

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  4. Messing with women is always flirting with danger.

    Have a terrific day. :)

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  5. The kid should listen. Guys are supposed to bring us the loot, not swipe it. Right? :D

    Thanks for the chuckle, Jim.

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  6. Lol, Jim. So that's why the youngest leaf is lying down. I like the phrase "saturated drunk."

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  7. Very good! Especially the description for the leaf which is in the middle, Dr Jim :)

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