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Sunday, January 12, 2014

Succinctly Yours

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Amateur Night was headed for a bust. Adriana could not bear to look. Carl was out of line, Maria and Santos were in ERODE** mode. Fairies not!

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- Picture prompt and Word of the Week, erode, were furnished by GMa -
- GMa's Succinctly Yours Week 147 has links to other posts and gives the rules -
- Rules: Use the photo as inspiration for a story. Maximum of 140 characters OR 140 words -
**Note:  "ERODE" stands for Effortless Ruin Order of Dancing Elves, per poet's license.
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7 comments:

  1. kaykualaSun Jan 12, 10:45:00 PM 2014

    Great MF Dr Jim. They certainly looked out of sync! Clever way of getting ERODE in its place.
    (and thanks for correcting my link)

    Hank

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  2. Yamini MacLeanMon Jan 13, 03:12:00 AM 2014

    hari OM
    HAH! Nice one. YAM xx

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  3. SandeeMon Jan 13, 11:05:00 AM 2014

    You did and excellent job getting ERODE to work.

    Have a fabulous day. :)

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  4. TammyMon Jan 13, 05:00:00 PM 2014

    Cute take for a cute picture!

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  5. UnknownTue Jan 14, 10:20:00 PM 2014

    Of course, Jim, all that ineptness is cute and entertaining. At least if one of the dancers is your child or grandchild. ;)

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  6. GELThu Jan 16, 11:08:00 PM 2014

    Poetic LICENSE as in drive that car---oops I read 'Carl" as "car" LOL
    Well done Jimmie
    Love the photo, too! Is one of your cutie granddaughters in there?

    -gel

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  7. audrey`Sun Jan 19, 05:31:00 PM 2014

    The cute, little ballerinas :)

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