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Sunday, June 01, 2014

Succinctly Yours

 
Pain was radiating through Garwin's body. Worse still was getting his hat in the dirt.
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He hated that the conductor threw him from the train.

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140 characters and spaces counted and spell checked by MicroSoft Word.

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© 2014 Jimmiehov
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- Picture prompt and Word of the Week, radiate
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GMa -
- GMa's Succinctly Yours Week 167 has links to other posts and gives the rules -
- Rules: Use the photo as inspiration for a story. Maximum of 140 characters OR 140 words -

6 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    Oh this is an excellent take on the prompt Jim!!

    Thanks for your comments; I love sci-fi and the very first story I wrote when we were asked to produce one at school was a 5000 worder on the colonisation of Mars... You may like to take a peek at this! YAM xx

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  2. Great take that really fits the picture!

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  3. Very well done and it's happened back in the day more than we know.

    Have a fabulous day. :)

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  4. I believe that story about the picture!!! Just stopping by to say hello!

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  5. Perhaps the train was too packed, Dr Jim :)

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  6. Garwin should have purchased a ticket. lol.
    I really liked this one, Jim.

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