Monday, January 10, 2011

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I wrote this for Susan's microFiction Monday. You can too! Just write a short tale (fiction preferred) about this picture in less than 140 characters and spaces. Then tell her and wait for the critique and praises!

Here goes my entry:

O Mr. Mothman! Hold me tight!

I'm mad about you, say you love me too!

I can hardly wait. I'll rush home, change, and pour some wine!


138 Characters
µ-fiction
Story Copyright
© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Mr. Mothman's picture by Susan. It's posted on her blog, Stony River

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# posted by Jim : 1/10/2011 12:03:00 AM
Comments:
Yep, that's what she said alright. Very well done.

Have a terrific day Jim. Big hug. :)
# posted by Blogger Sandee : Sun Jan 09, 06:38:00 PM 2011
 
A bit of a creepy romance don't you think? LOL!
# posted by Blogger Susan Fobes : Sun Jan 09, 06:57:00 PM 2011
 
Ah, nothing like a little creepy romance these days! More common than we know, I suspect! I love it, Jim! Hope you had a great weekend!

Sylvia
# posted by Blogger Sylvia K : Sun Jan 09, 07:04:00 PM 2011
 
I guess beauty is in the eye of the
beholder! Nice take!
# posted by Blogger Peggy : Sun Jan 09, 07:08:00 PM 2011
 
Aha, a totally different take on it - she's in love with him!! I would never have thought of that.
-- K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
# posted by Blogger Kay L. Davies : Sun Jan 09, 07:09:00 PM 2011
 
Looks like Mothman's gonna get the "blues," but only in a good way, if you know what I mean. LOL!

Come for a visit?
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*
# posted by Blogger SparkleFarkel : Sun Jan 09, 07:30:00 PM 2011
 
Wine does it, everytime.

Nice story, Jim--good voice.

Hope you have a great week.
# posted by Blogger Michael G-G : Sun Jan 09, 07:38:00 PM 2011
 
So did they get together? Was he everything she hoped for? Inquiring minds want to know...
Have a great week. Cheers.
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : Sun Jan 09, 08:26:00 PM 2011
 
oh my! she's in love with mothman, I hope she cas caster oil for him too, lol.
# posted by Blogger Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape : Sun Jan 09, 08:58:00 PM 2011
 
I hope she doesn't leave the porch light on. She'll be inside drinking the wine alone and waiting all night for Mothman to show up, and in the morning she'll not only wonder why he stood her up, but what was with the big pile of ashes on her front porch.
# posted by Anonymous quilly : Mon Jan 10, 12:46:00 AM 2011
 
Wonder what his breath is like???

Nice MFM

Moon Smiles and have a great week

my romance is a little off
# posted by Blogger moondustwriter : Mon Jan 10, 02:03:00 AM 2011
 
I am a sucker for a good love story!
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Mon Jan 10, 04:57:00 AM 2011
 
well they do say love is blind LOL! :O)
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : Mon Jan 10, 06:24:00 AM 2011
 
Hi Jim! Yes, a different take, and a good one at that!! :)
# posted by Blogger BECKY : Mon Jan 10, 06:49:00 AM 2011
 
WINE? yikes that might dismantle him-
Thanks
# posted by Blogger izzy : Mon Jan 10, 07:13:00 AM 2011
 
Who knew Mothman was a ladykiller? :0
# posted by Blogger hope : Mon Jan 10, 07:37:00 AM 2011
 
It looks like it might be a one sided romance. Maybe the wine will loosen the Mothman up.
# posted by Blogger Bill ~ {The Old Fart} : Mon Jan 10, 08:37:00 AM 2011
 
Thinks - his wings have got the moth in! LOL
# posted by Blogger Cad : Mon Jan 10, 12:48:00 PM 2011
 
It's love!
# posted by Blogger Maude Lynn : Mon Jan 10, 03:00:00 PM 2011
 
Fun one, have a great week! :O)
# posted by Blogger Diane : Mon Jan 10, 04:20:00 PM 2011
 
LOL! With Mr. Mothman for a mate, good thing there's wine! :>
# posted by Blogger Karen : Mon Jan 10, 11:26:00 PM 2011
 
maybe he will change out of his duds as well

just had to come back

LOL you made my day
# posted by Blogger moondustwriter : Tue Jan 11, 01:18:00 AM 2011
 
Well, people and mutants find love in the strangest guises ;-)
# posted by Blogger jabblog : Tue Jan 11, 08:44:00 AM 2011
 
Freakishly romantic, isn't it? Love truly is in the eyes of the beholder!
:)
# posted by Blogger Pooch : Tue Jan 11, 12:31:00 PM 2011
 

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