Monday, February 14, 2011
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Artie was wishing he had brushed his teeth and taken a bath this morning.
That would have made eating an apple for lunch more enjoyable.
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© 2011 Jimmiehov
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The Romantics prompt picture was selected by Susan.
It's posted on her blog, Stony River
Artie was wishing he had brushed his teeth and taken a bath this morning.
That would have made eating an apple for lunch more enjoyable.
139 Characters
µ-fiction
Story Copyright
© 2011 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
The Romantics prompt picture was selected by Susan.
It's posted on her blog, Stony River
I wrote this for Susan's microFiction Monday. You can too! Just write a short tale (fiction preferred) about this picture in less than 140 characters and spaces. Then tell her and wait for the critique and praises!
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I will try tonight but I may not get to answer your comments until later in the week.
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...and even sadder than not having fresh breath, he doesn't have a special someone to spend Valentine's Day with! :(
Good one, Jim.
Good one, Jim.
Ah, the things we forget or overlook!! Smelly breath, and no one for Valentine's Day! Poor guy! Great one for the day, Jim! Have a good week!
Sylvia
Sylvia
Made me chuckle, Jim...thanks for that. The poor guy should realize that if he keeps forgetting to brush his teeth he may not be ABLE to eat any apples!
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: Sun Feb 13, 08:07:00 PM 2011
: Sun Feb 13, 08:07:00 PM 2011
How true, if he had done those things he might have been paired off like the rest. Thanks for the chuckle!
hahahaha... or it would make a difference since it's Valentine's Day, he could have a date. nice one.
Amanda gently poked Carl in the chest, leaned forward and whispered, "If you try that again, you're a dead man."
Excellent one, Jim.
Late this week. Still recovering from a Valentine's extravaganza. Hope the rest of your week goes well.
Late this week. Still recovering from a Valentine's extravaganza. Hope the rest of your week goes well.
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