Sunday, October 21, 2012

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Betty Lou was watching granddaughter feed her fish.

Don't forget the minnows at the bottom, dear.

Grandma it's a waste. They're all fish bait.

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°°Grandma of Succinctly Yours Week 83 gives these directions:
°°Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words or less.
°°Grandma furnished this week’s fun photo.
°°Word of the Week, 'forget',was furnished by Grandma.

Rest in Peace, dear Adi

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# posted by Jim : 10/21/2012 02:59:00 PM
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Well, she has a point. Very well done.

Have a terrific day. :)
# posted by Blogger Sandee : Sun Oct 21, 05:18:00 PM 2012
 
The dialogue in the post is very captivating, Dr Jim :) It engages your readers' attention. Just like the colourful fish in the photo.
# posted by Blogger audrey` : Sun Oct 21, 05:49:00 PM 2012
 
Cute and clever, I sense the inspiration of being around your grandaughter in this piece! :-)
# posted by Blogger Josie Two Shoes : Sun Oct 21, 07:22:00 PM 2012
 
I have always wanted an aquarium - but I don't know I would have very much luck if you know what I mean!
# posted by Blogger Chatty Crone : Sun Oct 21, 08:14:00 PM 2012
 
But those minnows need to be plumped up so that they'll be A-1 fish bait. Very creative, Jim!
# posted by Blogger Pat : Sun Oct 21, 09:13:00 PM 2012
 
Take care of the minnows, and the sharks'll take care of themselves, eh? Hehehe!

BTW - this is Penny here, Alias Jinksy, if that helps?
# posted by Blogger Jinksy : Mon Oct 22, 01:23:00 AM 2012
 
Ah, the little fishes. Nice one.
# posted by Blogger anthonynorth : Mon Oct 22, 02:36:00 AM 2012
 
Cool. I can imagine a savvy little girl saying this to her grandma.
# posted by Blogger Shauna : Mon Oct 22, 08:21:00 PM 2012
 
hahaha. she made sense.
# posted by Blogger ruthinian : Tue Oct 23, 07:28:00 PM 2012
 
Yes, why should we waste fish bait! Witty take here, Dr Jim!

Hank
# posted by Blogger kaykuala : Wed Oct 24, 09:56:00 AM 2012
 
Very clever post, Jim! I can imagine my grand daughter talking to me like that. LOL but I will have to wait a long time for that to happen. Your writing is always poignant and so much fun. Mine is here
Have you a truly AWESOME WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Wed Oct 24, 10:28:00 PM 2012
 

My dearest Dr.Jim ,

I would like to invite you to join me for two of the memes I am hosting ,
one is the WEEKEND FUNNIES
and the other is the ?????? l60 ?????

Your participation will greatly enrich the meme and I will be very humbled and honored by your presence.

Hope to see you soon.

hugs
shakira
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Thu Oct 25, 05:44:00 AM 2012
 

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