Sunday, January 27, 2013
Succinctly-Yours
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Not so fast, Teddy.
I'm sick and tired of your whack whack here, whack whack there.
You haven't killed a fly in days!
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Not so fast, Teddy.
I'm sick and tired of your whack whack here, whack whack there.
You haven't killed a fly in days!
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Yes, the relationship may be disintegrating a bit. There's probably more than meets the eye here. Maybe he doesn't take out the trash either!
I've never seen a succinct tale that used the word of the week 4 times. Blue ribbon, Jim, and a gold star too. :D
I've never seen a succinct tale that used the word of the week 4 times. Blue ribbon, Jim, and a gold star too. :D
Your story almost had me singing - with a whack whack here and a whack whack there; you know like Old MacDonald. I enjoyed it.
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