Sunday, January 27, 2013

Succinctly-Yours

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Not so fast, Teddy.

I'm sick and tired of your whack whack here, whack whack there.

You haven't killed a fly in days!

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Word of the Week:whack -- Succinctly Yours Week 97
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# posted by Jim : 1/27/2013 02:26:00 PM
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Ahh, I fear a relationship unraveling here, she's starting to complain! :-)
# posted by Blogger Josie Two Shoes : Sun Jan 27, 02:34:00 PM 2013
 
Ah, no rag doll likes a loser. Nice one.
# posted by Blogger anthonynorth : Sun Jan 27, 03:04:00 PM 2013
 
Ha - I don't think that's so much to ask!
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Sun Jan 27, 04:20:00 PM 2013
 
Yes, the relationship may be disintegrating a bit. There's probably more than meets the eye here. Maybe he doesn't take out the trash either!

I've never seen a succinct tale that used the word of the week 4 times. Blue ribbon, Jim, and a gold star too. :D
# posted by Blogger Grandma's Goulash : Mon Jan 28, 08:56:00 AM 2013
 
What Grandma Goulash said. Yep, that covers it nicely.

Have a fabulous Monday. :)
# posted by Blogger Sandee : Mon Jan 28, 09:32:00 AM 2013
 
Your story almost had me singing - with a whack whack here and a whack whack there; you know like Old MacDonald. I enjoyed it.
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Mon Jan 28, 07:26:00 PM 2013
 
HaHa! :D
# posted by Blogger audrey` : Tue Jan 29, 03:46:00 PM 2013
 

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