Sunday, June 01, 2014

Succinctly Yours

 
Pain was radiating through Garwin's body. Worse still was getting his hat in the dirt.
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He hated that the conductor threw him from the train.

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140 characters and spaces counted and spell checked by MicroSoft Word.
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- Picture prompt and Word of the Week, radiate, were furnished by GMa -
- GMa's Succinctly Yours Week 167 has links to other posts and gives the rules -
- Rules: Use the photo as inspiration for a story. Maximum of 140 characters OR 140 words -

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# posted by Jim : 6/01/2014 08:04:00 PM
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Hari OM
Oh this is an excellent take on the prompt Jim!!

Thanks for your comments; I love sci-fi and the very first story I wrote when we were asked to produce one at school was a 5000 worder on the colonisation of Mars... You may like to take a peek at this! YAM xx
# posted by Blogger Yamini MacLean : Mon Jun 02, 07:03:00 AM 2014
 
Great take that really fits the picture!
# posted by Blogger Tammy : Mon Jun 02, 08:56:00 AM 2014
 
Very well done and it's happened back in the day more than we know.

Have a fabulous day. :)
# posted by Blogger Sandee : Mon Jun 02, 10:30:00 AM 2014
 
I believe that story about the picture!!! Just stopping by to say hello!
# posted by Blogger Chatty Crone : Mon Jun 02, 06:34:00 PM 2014
 
Perhaps the train was too packed, Dr Jim :)
# posted by Blogger audrey` : Tue Jun 03, 06:52:00 PM 2014
 
Garwin should have purchased a ticket. lol.
I really liked this one, Jim.
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Sat Jun 14, 08:56:00 PM 2014
 

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