Monday, January 24, 2011

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A dark and foggy night was setting in.

Al had wanted a quiet place on the Ohio River to dump the body.

Here is great. Pour the cement.


140 Characters
µ-fiction
Story Copyright
© 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

Note: Life sentence dealt for 'cowardly execution' (Nawaf Al-Enzi Link)

The Ohio River picture was taken by Susan . It's posted on her blog, Stony River

I wrote this for Susan's microFiction Monday. You can too! Just write a short tale (fiction preferred) about this picture in less than 140 characters and spaces. Then tell her and wait for the critique and praises!
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# posted by Jim : 1/24/2011 12:03:00 AM
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Yep that will work just fine. Only one body? Just saying.

Have a terrific day. Big hug. :)
# posted by Blogger Sandee : Sun Jan 23, 04:01:00 PM 2011
 
Oh, I do love a murder mystery and this is the perfect beginning for a great one! Love it, Jim! Hope your week goes well!

Sylvia
# posted by Blogger Sylvia K : Sun Jan 23, 05:03:00 PM 2011
 
Ah, yes, they start 'em young in the Cosa Nostra--learning the tricks of the trade. Good murder mystery, Jim!
# posted by Blogger Pat : Sun Jan 23, 05:23:00 PM 2011
 
OM, I smell a murder underway.
Perfect picture for a murder!
# posted by Blogger Peggy : Sun Jan 23, 05:32:00 PM 2011
 
Perfect place to hide the body!
# posted by Anonymous Sonia : Sun Jan 23, 06:02:00 PM 2011
 
Aha, yes, the old cement trick. Good take on the prompt, but what I like is your Microfiction instructions line, where it says "preferably fiction" - that cracked me right up!
-- K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
# posted by Blogger Kay L. Davies : Sun Jan 23, 06:13:00 PM 2011
 
Just wonder what Secrets the Ohio River does hold.
# posted by Blogger Bill ~ {The Old Fart} : Sun Jan 23, 06:23:00 PM 2011
 
Perfect cover under the fog.... :O)
# posted by Blogger Diane : Sun Jan 23, 07:04:00 PM 2011
 
and they say they only do that here in NJ ;)
well done Jim

Hope sends hugs
# posted by Blogger Dianne : Sun Jan 23, 07:19:00 PM 2011
 
Gosh wonder what's floating in this body of water?

Great MFM Jim
# posted by Blogger moondustwriter : Sun Jan 23, 07:39:00 PM 2011
 
So that's what happened to Jimmy Hoffa!
# posted by Blogger SouthLakesMom : Sun Jan 23, 07:57:00 PM 2011
 
Ahh...what perfect weather for body-dumping! Hope cement is on sale this time of the year....
Have a great week. Cheers!
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : Sun Jan 23, 09:31:00 PM 2011
 
"Ohio Noir!" I love it, Jim!

Hope you have a wonderful week.
# posted by Blogger Michael G-G : Sun Jan 23, 10:17:00 PM 2011
 
who done it, murder mistery, oh my!
# posted by Blogger Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape : Sun Jan 23, 11:13:00 PM 2011
 
Obviously you're no stranger to this sort of behaviour! Scary!
# posted by Blogger Rinkly Rimes : Sun Jan 23, 11:20:00 PM 2011
 
Hmmmm. I want the story behind the story!
# posted by Blogger Unknown : Mon Jan 24, 10:15:00 AM 2011
 
Ooh creepy! LOL! :O)
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : Mon Jan 24, 02:05:00 PM 2011
 
What stories a simple picture evokes! I like yours. :)

♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥
# posted by Blogger Elizabeth Mueller : Mon Jan 24, 02:59:00 PM 2011
 
a nice sunny day was expected on the marrow<><><you KNOW"red sky at night sailor's delight" He would be going to san marie island for a mai tie
# posted by Blogger Putz : Mon Jan 24, 04:06:00 PM 2011
 
Jim, you're sunnier than that. You can't fool us.
# posted by Blogger Doug The Una : Mon Jan 24, 06:04:00 PM 2011
 
Jim, this was good-just like a mystery novel, and I love a good mystery!
# posted by Blogger Susan Fobes : Mon Jan 24, 09:34:00 PM 2011
 
I hope they used QUIKRETE cement and concrete products!
# posted by Blogger k. riggs gardner : Tue Jan 25, 03:36:00 AM 2011
 
Oo-er - nefarious goings-on here!
# posted by Blogger jabblog : Tue Jan 25, 06:53:00 AM 2011
 
A good "Whoa!" to such a suspenseful and thought-provoking piece! I even imagined who I thought the author might truly be! ("Jim" is just your pseudonym, right?)
# posted by Blogger SparkleFarkel : Tue Jan 25, 09:44:00 AM 2011
 
Excerpted from my blog comments: "BTW, my common name really is Jim, a nickname for my given name, James."

Rats! I was high-hoping you might be Snoopy!
# posted by Blogger SparkleFarkel : Tue Jan 25, 02:58:00 PM 2011
 
Oh yeah! I'll get right on it- where's the chain?
# posted by Blogger izzy : Wed Jan 26, 03:54:00 PM 2011
 

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