Monday, February 21, 2011

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Hallways deserted and scarred, the only life in the old hospital was rats.

The scrubs cleaned so good the rats were starving.

Oh rats!




140 Characters
µ-fiction
Story Copyright
© 2011 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved


Note: My "scrubs" here are the scrub techs who formerly worked in the hospital's operating room. What Does a Surgical Scrub Tech Do?

The Deserted Building prompt picture was selected by
Susan.
It's posted on her blog,
Stony River

I wrote this for Susan's microFiction Monday. You can too! Just write a short tale (fiction preferred) about this picture in less than 140 characters and spaces. Then tell her and wait for the critique and praises!

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Comments:
That's clean indeed. Very well done.

Have a terrific day Jim. Big hug. :)
 
Okay.
 
That is CLEAN!! I love it! Hope you have a great week, Jim! Enjoy!

Sylvia
 
I wonder why the rats stay in there when they're starving. Maybe starvation affected their little cerebral cortexes (sp?)

Good one, Jim--unique!
 
LOL! Great job, Jim. This cracked me up.
 
You are a good story writer Jim. Hard to write a story with so few words.
 
Eeek. Rats. Starving rats. I think I just saw one scurry through the hall.

Great. :)
 
Jim;

That is clean, I'm impressed.
Don't want rats anywhere inside where I am. Outside is fine!
Sure made me smile after reading.
Have a great week Jim! :)
 
No food for rats? The scrubs must have moved everything out when cleaning. Good take!
 
Starving rats? Talk about being clean...Enjoy your week :-)
 
If they're starving that's good and clean. Nice one.
 
Somehow, I can't find any sympathy in my soul for RATS!

Well done, Jim!
 
Now that's a well run hospital.
 
Poor rats!
 
It's nice to know at least one thought about cleanliness in the Hospital.
 
Someone must have micro-managed those scrub techs very well, for the rats to be starving!

Nice take!
 
Jim, a very funny one this week! And you're right-memories crop up more and more as the years start to pile up...
 
Rats indeed!

Thanks for the comment on mine. Hope your week is going well.
 
I don't usually feel any sympathy for rats, but starvation may not be the most humane way to eradicate them...good one, Jim.
Cheers~
 
LOL! Excellent! :O)
 

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