Sunday, September 04, 2011


Bud slowly passed by his old school. One day he would stop in.

Ever since the practice teacher was found beneath the floor no one dared.
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137 Characters

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© 2011 Jimmiehov
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Written for Succinctly Yours – Week 24
The 'practice' prompt word and the picture were selected by
It's posted on her blog, Grandma's Goulash
Her Rules: Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words. It doesn’t have to be exactly 140, just not more.
Using the prompt word is not required but Grandma smiles bigger if we do.


She must have had some tough students that year! Wonder if he was one of them!

Been there, done that!
You know, I can see why people would avoid the school house.
Mysterious. Gotta wonder if he's the guilty party. You know, returning to the scene and all that.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Maybe the practice teacher learned the hard way that she had to be tough and now she's a tough old scary ghost-ess.

Good one, Jim!
Oh spooky, maybe she still treads the class room with book in hand - cue dark music!
Very creepy. I'd avoid the place, too!
Oooer there's a longer story there!
Hi Jim- You asked if Jerry sells real estate for a living...No, he's a retired math teacher and now supervises high school and junior high student teachers for a local university. But we have bought a few houses, so we can read between the lines in real estate!
I figured this photo would unleash some school day memories, but so far I've got haunting and bodies. BTW, that's not a complaint. :D

Good one, Jim.
A mystery in the they hear odd noises passing by? Enjoyed this.
Okay, this one really spooked me-the poor teacher Jim! LOL!
I'd love to know the rest of this story, I'm sure it's good!
I think he's the one who put her beneath the floor. ...You did say he was a she, right?
Sorry about the fires down there Jim, they sound awful. Marilyns brother lives in Dallas and has really been suffering.
I had a teacher like that. I do love the photo.

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